The Unreformed Mr. Darcy
Title and Author: The Unreformed Mr. Darcy, Lin Mei Wei
Type: P&P Variation
Perspective: Mostly Elizabeth
Romance Level: Kissing
Recommended: yes, 3 stars
Summary: This P&P variation deviates at the proposal at Hunsford. What if Elizabeth was worried Jane would be forced to marry a rich, but unscrupulous man to help the family? Would Elizabeth accept Darcy's proposal? And what would Darcy do when he discovers how Elizabeth really feels about him?
Things I Liked:
* This was believable. Of all the reasons Elizabeth might marry Darcy before she loved him, saving Jane seems likely.
* As bad as Wickham was in this one, I liked the story line that had him doing something truly desperate to get money from Darcy. (Some may find it far-fetched however.)
*Neither of the characters is likable in the beginning. I liked that both Darcy and Elizabeth had to change for their success.
Things I Didn't Like:
* The variations that start with Elizabeth marrying Darcy before she likes him make me anxious. It is like watching a little kid running down a hill. You know the fall is going to happen and it will be painful.
* The ending felt rushed. I would have liked to see more time for them to warm to each other.
* Everyone else in this story is a bit character since most of the action takes place at Hunsford or in London.
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