Another Proposal


Title and Author: Another Proposal by Jann Rowland
Type: Pride and Prejudice Variation
Perspective: Darcy and Elizabeth
Romance Level: Kissing
Recommended: Yes, 2.5 stars I enjoyed it but it wasn't in my top 10 P&P Fan Fiction
Access: Available through Kindle Unlimited

Summary: What if.... Mr. Darcy learned of Mr. Collins proposal and it spurred him into action? What if Mr. Bingley never left Netherfield? Would an earlier knowledge of Darcy's feeling change Elizabeth's mind about him? This variation takes place in the few days after the Netherfield Ball and is a short (just over 110 pages) read.

Pros:
* This is my favorite Lady Catherine by far.
* I like the addition of Fitzwilliam and Georginana
* It was a fun premise, but a quick solution and outcome to everything.

Cons:
* This was very short (like 110 pages). Since the action takes place over the course of a few days, it doesn't quite feel plausible.
* There is almost no conflict here. Mr Collins is really the only thing against the couple and no one takes him seriously. Even Wickham never really gets any wicked place in the story.
* It is makes for an interesting retelling, but not believable that Darcy would act on his feelings this early in the story.

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