An Arranged Marriage

Title and Author: An Arranged Marriage, Jan Hahn 
Type: Pride and Prejudice Variation
Perspective: Elizabeth
Romance Level: Kissing (inferences to more) 
Recommended: Yes, 3.5 stars

 Summary:
In this Pride and Prejudice Variation, Mr. Bennett dies in a hunting accident while Elizabeth is at Rosings Park (after the proposal from Darcy). We pick up the story 6 months later, when Darcy reappears to offer marriage to Elizabeth again. This time she has little choice since he will provide for her family if they do marry. She is clear that she would not marry him otherwise and is generally disagreeable while he won't explain his decisions or history so she can understand him better. 

 Pros:
* This version has Elizabeth understanding Darcy's character long after they are married, but he is respectful of her. It is an interesting twist. 
* The characters feel true to the original. For example, Darcy is private with his actions with the servants in a way similar to how he is private in the Lydia/Wickham events. 
* I like Colonel Fitzwilliam in this. We see a lot more of him in this version. 

Cons: 
* Some of the scenes make Elizabeth incredibly dense in an attempt to show her thought process (for example, thinking she has a guest room next to hers instead of Darcy's room, hearing a heart beat and feeling breathing for at least a paragraph before realizing Darcy is next to her).
* It seems like someone would have clued in on the tension between Darcy and Elizabeth when they are first married, but even Georgiana and the Colonel seem clueless. 


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